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I guess this would be 'Good Night' Part 2 since it's the same person (and floor) as my last one: [link] . I wanted to see what I could make without the other person there, and it is pretty much what I was hoping for (although the other person is still there, just not so obvious..).
*Please critique if you can. It would really help me to improve*
Stock:
~syccas-stock [link] - Model (on floor)
=Falln-Stock [link] - Model
~jesuisautre [link] - Floor
~SusieStock [link] - Background
~chocolateir-stock [link] - Cave
~sarthony [link] - Swan
~texurestockbyhjs [link] - Birds
*Katikut [link] - Grass Brushes
=charfade [link] - Grass Brushes
*I give permission to =GenesisClub to submit my artwork*
*Please critique if you can. It would really help me to improve*
Stock:
~syccas-stock [link] - Model (on floor)
=Falln-Stock [link] - Model
~jesuisautre [link] - Floor
~SusieStock [link] - Background
~chocolateir-stock [link] - Cave
~sarthony [link] - Swan
~texurestockbyhjs [link] - Birds
*Katikut [link] - Grass Brushes
=charfade [link] - Grass Brushes
*I give permission to =GenesisClub to submit my artwork*
Image size
969x1523px 1.51 MB
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Technique ImpactMy first critique, but somehow I feel that finally I must try the system <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Wink)" />First of all, what for I paid attention while browsing works in my devwatch was the vision. I really like the concept and also an intriguing title. The silhouette of a lady on the bridge makes it even more interesting. When I firstly saw this work I thought that perhaps the lady on the bridge is a murderer, but I think that it could be interpreted in many other ways. Maybe the girl in the foreground committed a suicide just while ago?
But coming back to the art itself: the composition and tones look very nice. I think that the swan might be a symbol of innocence here.
I also like the emotive side of this one.
The only one thing which I believe could be done a little better is lighting. I mean sun rays on the top... They're definitely too strong for me, not so soft and delicate like real light, I suppose.
But all in all I still think it's a good work, perhaps one of the best in your gallery.