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Night. by cloudburst666 Night. by cloudburst666
Not sure what to say about this one... there's somethings wrong with it, but I'm not quite sure what. I think this is one of my best works yet.

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`Elandria [link] - Model
*fetishfaerie-stock [link] - Rock platform thing..
=Cat-in-the-Stock [link] - Waterfall
~CatStock [link] - Sky :iconcatstock:

*I give permission to =GenesisClub to submit my artwork*
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Critique by sjm1010 May 6, 2009, 12:21:14 PM
Hi Phil!

Dude you have the ability to go forward. Your pieces are well done but they lack the blending that they should have. Instead of the women appearing on the piece she should be blended in the piece as if she belongs in the piece. Same with the water at its horizon point, should be blended.

The other thing is to watch for small things that should be removed from the piece to make it more elegant and flowing, like that little stick in the water jutting out. Your right where you should be in your development but now its time to cross over and make your pieces more realistic in nature.

I see you becoming very good in your art as long as you go forward now. This is a friendly critique......
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Pickyme Featured By Owner May 25, 2009
Blends... But other than that this is a good piece! :)
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CatStock Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Interesting image =^_^=
Thanks for using my stock =)
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Baller25 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
very nice!! i like the contrast of the dark and light mixed together!!
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cloudburst666 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
Thank you very much! :)
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Baller25 Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
:D
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Elandria Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional General Artist
Really lovely! Thanks for using my stock! :hug:
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cloudburst666 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Thank you :)
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Cat-in-the-Stock Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Very nice and peaceful. I like the night effect you created there :nod:
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cloudburst666 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Thanks very much! :D
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mynoahsart Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice...
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